Kage for Moonclanleader!! Read description!!!
posted by robb 3 months, 7 days ago.
From: The13YearOldArtist

No Good
Review:

Rob B - One word is all I need to describe this video. D I S T U R B I N G ! ! ! “No Good!!!!!”

Rob L - I’m assuming that this video was created and produced by a kid who is only thirteen years old as his/her Youtube user id is The13YearOldArtist. So I will first give positive feedback, then I will follow with some constructive criticism. The animation is pretty decent for a thirteen year old kid. I’m impressed that he/she was able to animate and put this storyboard together and post it on Youtube given their age. I think this shows that they have some potential. Also, excellent choice in music selection. Glycerin is one of my favorite songs.
Ok onto the constructive feedback. To some extent I have to agree with Rob B. The images of the dead dog were a bit disturbing and the fact that a thirteen year old drew the images only increases the moroseness of the video. Also, it is very boring for a viewer to have to look at the same image for over a minute while the background song is playing. It would have been better if the author could have created more animation to fill this gap or just edited the song to cut the video short. I was very tempted to stop the video because of this long pause as I figured there would be nothing else at the end. So that is my two cents. Please keep trying, I think you have talent and can do better. My rating “No Good”.
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